Natural Process Diagrams: The Life-cycle of Frogs
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram gives information about the life cycle of a frog.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The process demonstrates how a frog’s development takes place over time.
Overall, the diagram outlines a sequence of natural developments that ensure the survival of frogs through metamorphosis.
Initially, the cycle starts with an adult frog laying eggs in water. These eggs develop into embryos, which then hatch into tadpoles. The tadpoles cling to water plants and develop external gills for breathing. Following this, their tail keep beacoming longer, followed by the appearance of hindlegs. At this stage, they survive by consuming nutrients stored in their tail.
As the front legs begin to grow, the color of the body gradually changes from black to green. In the next stage, the tails become shorter until it disappeares, marking the transformation into young frog. Eventually, the young frog becomes a fully grown adult, now completely green in color. The entire cycle then repeats itself

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